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ext_85481 ([identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seren_ccd 2009-08-14 09:12 pm (UTC)

Fun interlude, but there are some inconsistencies in verb tense - switching between past and present occasionally throughout - that need fixing.
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