N'awww - you! You are just so good at this. Thanks for writing this one. As soon as you mentioned 'that time with the mention outside the thing that glowed' I just had to know more - it was too ambiguous not to elaborate!
I still maintain that you are Stephen Moffatt in disguise, or at least a writer of Doctor Who because you somehow manage to get them so in character.
Just brilliant. Keep writing these.