Oh goodness gracious so freaking fun (sorry for the late comment cuz I was waffling over reviewing on FFN to up your numbers or commenting here wehre you could actually respond and we can squee together and it be wondermous lol).
Anyway! This was fantastic as your fics oh so often are. I really liked the style you used here too; you haven't used this sort of format before with the long time line. I really think it worked well for setting the feel of how time just almost drifts the longer you're stuck somewhere along. You may know how many days it is, but you REALLY don't want to think about it too much. Especially not where there's Scruffy!Becker to drool over and then fool around with lol.
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Date: 2011-06-12 01:05 am (UTC)Anyway! This was fantastic as your fics oh so often are. I really liked the style you used here too; you haven't used this sort of format before with the long time line. I really think it worked well for setting the feel of how time just almost drifts the longer you're stuck somewhere along. You may know how many days it is, but you REALLY don't want to think about it too much. Especially not where there's Scruffy!Becker to drool over and then fool around with lol.