You incredible, brilliant, shameless individual! xD I loved their banter in the beginning and how he didn't believe her when she told him where she worked. And the fact that Jess was bold enough to PROVE IT, just made me so proud. I loved how Becker was turned on to the point of speechlessness. The bit about Lester telling Becker about Jess' comment to the Admiral about frothy coffee was genius. Lester totally ships Becker and Jess lol Ah, and the magnificent sex scene, you write them like no other, my dear! I totally agree with fringedweller's subtitle. Jess was a little minx in this and Becker totally loved it ;D I hope you never find that shame you're looking for! The ending was so cute... *puppy eyes* Any chance we get to see what Becker had in mind? xD
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Date: 2011-08-19 12:10 am (UTC)I loved their banter in the beginning and how he didn't believe her when she told him where she worked.
And the fact that Jess was bold enough to PROVE IT, just made me so proud.
I loved how Becker was turned on to the point of speechlessness.
The bit about Lester telling Becker about Jess' comment to the Admiral about frothy coffee was genius. Lester totally ships Becker and Jess lol
Ah, and the magnificent sex scene, you write them like no other, my dear!
I totally agree with fringedweller's subtitle. Jess was a little minx in this and Becker totally loved it ;D
I hope you never find that shame you're looking for!
The ending was so cute...
*puppy eyes*
Any chance we get to see what Becker had in mind? xD