This? Priceless. Jim is such a tramp (and I mean that in a lovable way LOL), and Bones - you captured his tone and his attitude perfectly. I could just see this on screen, with Bones' reactions exactly this way.
"Does that mean you want to give me a sponge bath?" he asked hopefully.
"Jesus Christ, Jim," McCoy said loudly. "Knock it off and let the woman do her job in peace."
This part just killed me. I giggled like a mad woman for about two minutes before I could continue reading.
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Date: 2009-07-18 01:21 pm (UTC)"Does that mean you want to give me a sponge bath?" he asked hopefully.
"Jesus Christ, Jim," McCoy said loudly. "Knock it off and let the woman do her job in peace."
This part just killed me. I giggled like a mad woman for about two minutes before I could continue reading.
This was excellent. :)