This was wonderful, and the way it ended I nearly forgot it wasn't a multi-chapter fic (not that you didn't end it well, I just mean you sort of set up a situation with Hake that never gets resolved), so I'm excited that you plan on writing on. Tony was pretty funny. X-ray vision! You have to love reporters. At least he has a sense of humor about those kinds of things. I did notice that there were a few spelling/typographical errors, though. Just a heads-up :)
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Date: 2008-05-13 10:16 pm (UTC)