Fics I've never written

[seren_ccd]

Ooh, awesome meme borrowed from vega_ofthe_lyre.

Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any (or all) of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.

Feel free to try any fandom you have reason to think I know, but if I don't at all know the fandom I'll have to say so.

Comments

[vega-ofthe-lyre.livejournal.com]

I totally adore that Iron Man fic of yours, I Need Some Fine Wine and You, You Need To Be Nicer. Tony's voice was absolutely amazing, and your Pepper is just fantastic, and the whole thing managed to be funny while still maintaining that edge of poignancy. (And it was nice to see a peek of the larger Marvel universe, you worked the movie canon really well and I really got a sense of the weight of the history between the characters!)

:P

[seren-ccd.livejournal.com]

First line:

It was at 11:42 am on a Thursday in the middle of a debate with Steve over the finer points of choosing the correct metal alloy that Tony realized that he was in love with his PA.

Last line:

She handed his coffee to him and he, very carefully, did not let his fingers brush against hers.

Thanks so much! It was difficult, because I wanted to show how much they really do love each other, even though they'll never act on their feelings. He's too damaged and will always think she needs more than he's capable of giving. Which is very hard to write, because I really wanted to give them a happy ending or at the very least some awesome workshop sexin'. ;) Maybe next time!

Hell's bells. I'm going to have to write this now. Damnit.

[vega-ofthe-lyre.livejournal.com]

Oh, damn, I really want to read the whole thing!

[lizbet0.livejournal.com]

Hell's bells. I'm going to have to write this now. Damnit. {giggling madly}